Please ignore any spelling errors too.
Okay, it might be cheezy.. but gimme a break, i've never written a story before.
Please ignore any spelling errors too.
Also, the story is written rather complicatedly. Speech dialogue, Normal writing, and Narration. Narration is usually AceFox explaining something to you that just happened in the story, this text is yellow (not unlike that guys narration in the movie "Fight Club").
Halfway through chapter 2, I decided to discontinue this text story and start over as a Comic Strip
Index.
| Chapter
1 : A day at the office Act 1 : The flat - It's not my day dude Act 2 : At the station Act 3 : The flat Act 4 : The Fowl & Phoenix pub |
Chapter
2 : A new girl in town *Still Under Construction * Act 1 and 2 completed |
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